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  • Mood: Stuck
  • Listening to: the people all around me
  • Reading: the expressions on their faces
  • Watching: they're every move
  • Playing: the game of society
  • Eating: the words they say
  • Drinking: my life away
Nothing new is really going on, I just wanted to point out that I'm bored and busy all at the same time. I wanna write stuff but school's being such a bitch, yeah know? Granted my cousin got me addicted to this anime called Haikyu!! Right after getting me hooked into Free! (all in which are full of adorkable sports anime guys, which you should totally go see) and have been watching them whenever I have the spare time. But other than that busy. Seriously, I don't even remember the last time I wrote something.

Speaking of writing, I was trying out this new idea called Correct me if I'm Wrong and it did get some good comments. I may continue that if I get the time but... I'm already kinda bored with it. Lame right? I mean, I just started it and now I'm bored with it. I guess that's cause I'm having a hard time figuring out how to make it exciting later on. I don't want it to be JUST about Sasuke editing Naruto's writing after all. As fellow followers you should know I'm ALL about the drama. I was actually thinking about going back and trying that Get a Life Kai idea I had a few journals back.

Get a Life KaiHave any of you guys heard of Dragonball Z Kai and where like "what the fuck is Kai?" like I was? Well, from what I've interpreted it means renewed. I guess it's like starting over but using the same plot / concept? Who knows *shrugs shoulders*.
So what's this got to do with Get a Life? Well, after reviewing a few comments on the series (mainly fanfiction.net) a lot of people really wanted me to be more focused on the actual "gaming" aspect of the series and less on the drama (oh and my grammar, but that's not gonna get any better thanks to my learning disability and me not being able to hear / catch what most people perceive as wrong. As for spelling, if someone wants to edit my work awesome, or wise, GET OVER IT!!). Which is pretty fair considering that was kinda the point of the series. What ended up happening is that, well, I don't make outlines for my stories, so when I write it's just whatever comes to mind. So I guess what happened was that there came an opportunity to add some


Any thoughts?

(Also this is the part where I sound like a broken record and say "Hey guys, you got any idea's I should try out?" XD )

I would really like some comments.

And speaking of comments I'll still leave some for those who wanted me to read their stories and tell them what I thought of it or point out a few things like I did a few months ago

Supporting the fansOver the years people every now and then leave me comments about how they would like me to read their work and give them advise or ideas. Which I think is awesome because they asked ME. I love writing stories and I want to support others who do as well. Even more so because when I first started out the only one who would read my stuff was my cousin, which most of you know as my editor. I know that doesn't sound like much, but thanks to her fueling me with wild ideas and editing my work I was able to become the kick ass YaoiTotoro you come to know and love today. It took just one person. Yeah I got many fans now who totally help motivate me too (by the way, thanks guys ^^ ) but I wouldn't of even gotten fans if it weren't for her.
Which is why I am making this journal. We may not be cousin's but I can certainly be that person who motivates you and lend you a hand. If you guys ever want me to read any of your stuff comment here! I will read your work and give whatever advise I can. Grant


Also I was just randomly curious as to which story you guys liked more, Get a Life or the Nerds and Jocks are STILL in College. I kinda wanna know so I know which one I should be focused on more. 

Anyways, I guess that's it for now. I'll try to be better at keeping you guys updated and actually do some writing.

Again I would love comments and suggestions!! I'm bored and don't wanna do homework!!

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...what? It's not like anyone actually reads this (it's just there to fill up the page and look pretty).

Here, go look at some stamps I've collected instead:

The one's that represent me:

Gimme more sleep by prosaix Stamp: Without Internet by Silver-MoonNight

dA is my Crack by AssClownFish It's MY gallery stamp by dazza1008 I Suck at Drawing Backgrounds by MelissaDalton

Slow interwebz by prosaix I support ignoring by prosaix I Hate School by Davidgtza2

:icondabettethanfbstamp1::icondabettethanfbstamp2:

Oh and F.Y.I Stamp: Avatar change by o0OInuyashaO0o

Some random cute shit:
Totoro Stamp by SazLeigh Studio Ghibli Love by ReverieSummoner Totoro Stamp 1 by Toonfreak

Stitch stamp by tessary

OMG HUMON I LOVES YOU! XD :
SATW Stamp by decors SATW Follower by decors :thumb173185946:

My favorite (male) characters in order:
SATW - I love Denmark by decors SATW - I love Norway by decors SATW - I love Germany by decors

SATW - I Love Finland by decors SATW - I Love Sweden by decors SATW - I love America by decors

SATW - I love Australia by decors SATW - I love Iceland by decors
Australia is hot but...he's not in a lot of them...If he was he'd be way up the list...
*burst out laughing* I just realized just how low America is in the list and that I'm American. That's just sad.


DIGIMON SEASON ONE BITCHES!! XD

Gomamon Stamp by L3xil3in Gomamon Invasion Stamp by Stamp221 Gomamon Stamp by SpadaStamps

Agumon n Gomamon Singing Stamp by Stamp221 Joe and Gomamon Stamp by funlakota

And of course, Yaoi Stamp by ki55-me DA Stamp male-slash01 by portisHeart

Love Is Love Sasunaru Stamp by PaoUchiuga SN - Shippuden Kiss by DoctorMLoli :thumb125080864:

Stamp for me by Natzabel NaruSasu Stamp by KandyPrower SasuNaru - SemeUke by DoctorMLoli

Sasunaru fan by Yaoi-SasuNaru-FC Naruto: Nagareboshi - SasuNaru by Vulpixi-Stamps Stampina SN by ElenaWinsi

SasuNaru Stamp - Kiss me by SRKAddict SasuNaru - Happy Days by SRKAddict S+N stamp by Neji-x-Hyuuga

sasunaru stamp 7 by Neji-x-Hyuuga sasunaru stamp 2 by Neji-x-Hyuuga sasunaru stamp 4 by Neji-x-Hyuuga

SasuNaru heart stamp by Neji-x-Hyuuga sasunaru stamp 3 by Neji-x-Hyuuga Team SasuNaru stamp by Quila-Quila

SasuNaru stamp by NatsukoTanaka Naruto - UKE 2 by DoctorMLoli epic sasunaru stamp by Yaoi-SasuNaru-FC

SasuNaru Stamp FTW by alexyoshida Why is it Always with You by LadyQuintessence Sasuke x Naruto Stamp by kilala30144

Uzu Uzu Comp 2 - DO.NOT.FAVE by SasuNaru-FanClub Stampina SN by ElenaWinsi SN Stamp by AleSwan

I need Sasunaru Stamp by Aikito-chan I Support SasuNaru stamp by BlackRainbow2327

Yeah, I'm not obsessed, nooooo.... XD

Oh, and I like Llama's :iconcoolllamaplz:

naruto blood prison bondage by YaoiTotoro <-- I know you want to...
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He wanted to see him again, no, he NEEDED to see him again. Sasuke groaned as he leaned back in his chair and began throwing a bouncy ball at the wall and continuously catching it. Naruto was literally the only “normal person” he had ever met. Granted being called normal wasn’t exactly a complement, but everyone else he knew were either rich snobs, crazy obsessive fan girls, or worse, pesky annoying older brothers. So when he was around him he felt somewhat normal himself. A feeling he didn’t often get to feel. He then caught the ball and kept it in his hand as he tried recalling more about him. The kid even looked normal… if you excluded those odd whisker marks on his checks.

“How in the world is someone like him ACTUALLY friends with Sakura?”
One of life’s greatest mysteries that one. He placed the ball on his desk and began typing up the boy’s name on the computer to see if anything would come up. After all, not just anybody got invited to a Haruno party. Yet as he scrolled nothing came up. Maybe he was normal after all…

“Naruto? An’t that some kind of fishcake?”
Itachi commented as he loomed above his brother while munching on some snacks.
“Hell if I know.” Sasuke commented as he reached his hand into the bag and pulled out some chips for himself “I’m just trying to find someone.”
“Oooooh~”
“Not like that.”
“Riiiiight.” Itachi then rested his chin on Sasuke’s head “So who is he?”
“Some guy I ran into at the party last night.”
“Ch, not like that my ass.” He then pointed at the screen “Try typing in his last name.”
Last name? Fuck what was it again? Sasuke frowned as he began typing questionably, Uzumi? Nope. Uzu…Uzu… Crist why was he so bad with names? Probably cause he never had a reason to bother remembering them until now. He then leaned back in his seat, causing Itachi to get off, and blew air through his noise in disappointment.

“Welp, this sucks.”
Itachi stood behind him and pondered.
“It maybe a bit of a stretch but if he was at the party-“
“No, I will not ask her who he is. Sides-“ Sasuke scowled as he glanced away. “it’s not like it’s that big of a deal.”
“Yeah.” Itachi snorted “Since she’s probably gonna throw another party soon anyways.” Sasuke’s face un-scrunched and his eyes widened a bit “So you’ll probably get to see him again.”
Oh yeah he didn’t think about that. Mainly cause he didn’t want to. He never liked the idea of going to Sakura’s parties. If anything he was usually thinking of ways to avoid them.

“Is it weird that I actually can’t wait for the next party?”
Itachi looked at him dumbfounded.
“Okay who are you and what have you done with my brother?”
Sasuke laughed. Yeah maybe that WAS a bit too weird.

When was the next party anyways?


(Meanwhile miles and miles away)

“So like, I was thinking about throwing another party this weekend.” Sakura commented as she snapped her bubble gum between her teeth.
“But aren’t your folks out of town then?” Naruto raised a brow skeptically.
“Exactly! This would be the best time to do it!”
Naruto sighed as he shocked his head disappointedly. He knew he should tell her not too… but damn she was right. It wasn’t often her parents were out and her house would be a perfect place for a bash.
“They are SO gonna kill you.”
“Only if I get caught! You still got all those numbers right?”
He continued to shake his head slowly but smiled as he pulled out the contact book.
“I can have every kid in school go to your party.”
“Excellent! Ooh! And make sure that one kid you hang out with goes too.”
“Kiba?”
“Yeah! His music is killer!”
He could not believe he was actually gonna help her pull this off. But then again, what else where friends for? And speaking of friends…

Sakura then noticed Naruto biting his bottom lip and sighed.
“Now what?”
“Oh uh, I was just thinking that this would be an excellent opportunity to try and win over that Sasuke guys attention.” Her eyes widen “I mean, it’s probably not everyday he gets to go to a non over the top classy party that’s actually not boring. Who knows? Maybe he’ll even wanna stick around?”
“Holly shit Naruto! You're a genius!!” she then hugged him as quickly as she let go of him “Oh glob how will I contact him? The number I have of his never works on my phone…”
“You could try using mine?”
She then squealed as she now gave him the choke hug of death.
“You are a total life savior!”
She then let go to snatch Naruto’s phone as he rubbed his poor neck in dismay.

He felt fucking awful. Not just cause of his neck but by what he was doing. He wasn’t trying to get the two of them together. He was using her to reach Sasuke. But what other choice did he have? Sasuke didn’t go to their school and it wasn’t like he could ask Sakura to give him his number without her asking for any favors. This way he not only had Sasuke’s number in his history but in such a way Sakura would not realize he had it since it wouldn't be in his contacts. He loved Sakura as a friend, he really did, but he needed someone to talk to who wasn’t a rich snob, a stereotypical bro like most his other friends, or, quite frankly, a girl. He just wanted a normal guy to talk and possibly hang out with. Was that too much to ask?

( meanwhile back at Sasuke’s)

“Who’d be calling you now?”
“Ignore it, it’s probably spam.”
The phone stopped ringing. Curious, Itachi picked up the phone and played the message on speaker.

-Hey Sasuke-Kun, it’s me Sakura-Chan!

Itachi looked at the phone dully.
“Sakura…Chan?” (they're NOT Japanese)
“Didn’t I block her AND change my number? How the hell is she doing this?”

-I’m gonna throw a bodacious party this weekend full of alcohol, music, and absolutely no adult super vision!

“… Oh goodie.” ←Sasuke
“Bodacious? Who the fuck says that?” ←Itachi

-And I’m sure everyone would be totally psyched if you came. Especially me~

Sasuke then stuck his tong out in disgust.

-Anyways hope to see you there!

The message stopped and the two brothers stared at each other.

“Wanna be my designated driver?”
“Ah yes, because I look SO forward to drunken babies making babies.”
“No one says you have to go.”
“And miss an opportunity of seeing my brother making a dumbass out of himself?”
Sasuke scoffed as he nudged Itachi’s side.
“Don’t you find ways of making me do that already?”
“Ah but this time it’ll be due to alcohol and poor decision making in front of the guy you like.”
“I don’t ‘like’ him.”
“Says the guy who was stalking him online.”
“… shut up.”
Correct me if I'm wrong 2 (SasuNaru)
I realize I posted up two versions of chapter 2, but I originally wrote a NaruSasu chapter only to find out later on that more people commented and wanted it to be a SasuNaru. Because this is what the majority wanted THIS is the actual chapter 2 I'm gonna stick with, the other is a bonus (I still wanted to post it regardless). So yeah, I hope you enjoy it! ^^

NaruSasu version : yaoitotoro.deviantart.com/art/…
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Itachi just stood there dumbfounded.
“Who are you and what have you done with my brother?”
Sasuke rolled his eyes.
“Good morning to you too Itachi.”
Itachi twitched. His brother NEVER said good morning to him.
“No seriously, who the fuck are you?”
Sasuke sighed as he continued filling out the log in page. Itachi had every right to be questioning him right now. After all, Sasuke repeatedly stated that he’d NEVER get a facebook due to all those annoying pesky girls looking for him, yet here he was making an account.

“I don’t know how else to find him…”
Itachi raised a brow in a smirking manner as he hopped onto the beanbag chair beside him.
“Do tell~”
“Whatever you’re thinking, stop it. It’s nothing like that.”
“Says the guy making a facebook account just to stalk him.”
“I am NOT stalking him!”
“Ah huh.”
“I’m-! … I’m merely trying to get reacquainted with him.”
“Staaaaaalker~”
Sasuke let in a breath of air trying to calm his nerves. He was going to have a good day god damn it, and he refused to let his stupid older brother ruin it.

“And enter.” He pressed the enter button and stared at the empty profile. … and continued to stare. …staaaare-
“Want some help?”
“Well only cause you insist-“
Itachi rolled his eyes as he clicked on the search bar.
“What’s his name?”
“Naruto.” Itachi raised a brow, which made Sasuke nervous. “What?”
“You’re looking for a guy who’s named after a ramen fishcake?”
“Like your one to talk weasel.”
Tushay. Itachi typed in the name and a few options came up.
“Which-“
“That one!”
Sasuke pointed on the one whose profile picture matched the boy from the previous day.

Itachi smiled genially as he clicked on it. He had never seen his brother so interested in someone else. His eyes then widened as he looked at the profile. Especially someone so… wow, words couldn’t even begin to describe.
“I maybe wrong, but I think his favorite color miiiiight be orange…”
“Yeah think?”
Itachi snorted as he scrolled through the boy’s profile. From what they could pick up from the profile alone was that he was obsessed with orange, ramen… and the Trail Blazers?

“He doesn’t even go to your school, how do you know him?”
Sasuke bit his lip as he thought about how to choose his words carefully.
“We meet at Sakura’s party…”
“Oo la la~”
“Again nothing like that.”
“But I didn’t see him there.”
“That’s cause he was on the roof.” Sasuke could already see the twinkle of excitement in Itachi’s eyes as he ushered him to continue “…we meet on the rooftop.”

“And you two stared into the stars like a sweet old married couple in love.” Sasuke blushed as he gave an over exaggerated sigh as he rested his hand on his forehead in a dramatic manner “How romantic~”
“I hate you. I hate you so much.”
Itachi chuckled as he then clicked something on the computer.
"And I love you too."
“What did you do?!?”
“I made a friend request.”
“You what?!”
“Love yeah!”
He the bolted out of the room with Sasuke following not too far behind throwing objects at him.
“No, no you do not!!” he then threw a book, which missed by mere meters that angered him even more. “Itachi, god damn it, come back here so that I can kill you!!”

(meanwhile miles away)

Naruto regretted this immediately. Yeah he was the one who technically asked to meet her at the mall and asked to talk about this, but this really wasn’t worth it.
“And his hair, oh his hair!”
Naruto rolled his eyes.
“Yeah yeah and he has PERFECT duck butt shaped hair that’s smooth as a baby’s ass. I get it already!”
Sakura glared at him.
“No! No you don’t!”
Naruto groaned as he sulked his head to his arms. He just wanted to know more about the boy he encountered at the party. Not know every microscopic detail about his damn hair.

As Sakura continued her rant, he felt his phone vibrate in his pocket. Curious he decided to check it out. After all, ANYTHING would be more interesting than this… his eyes then grew wide as he noticed the new friend request.
“You said he DOESN’T have a facebook, right?”
Sakura sighed.
“Yeah, but I wish he did.” She then clasped her hands and looked up into the sky longingly. “That way I could always know what he’s up too…” then blushed as she then waved her hands back and forth defensively. “I-I mean-!! W-We can get to know each other better! Yeah!” she then laughed nervously as she took a sip of her drink.

Naruto then looked down at his phone. So… did that mean he made a profile… just to find him? He smiled as he clicked onto his account and saw how empty and new it was. So he wasn’t the ONLY one who was curious…

Naruto was bi. Boy, girl, so long as they were as good looking as their personality Naruto didn’t really care about silly things like gender. But he never did have much luck with the boys. For whatever reason, they were very difficult to ask out. Luckily since he still liked girls it wasn’t too much of a problem… until he met him. Naruto bit his bottom lip. Man he wanted to be something more with Sasuke… but what if he was straight? He then looked at Sakura dully. Nope, diffidently gay. The guy had a girl like Sakura who was swooning and obsessing over him and wanted none of it. Speaking of Sakura though… he winced as he continued to stair at her, she did claim dibs on him a long ass time ago (long before he even met him). It’d be a dick move to steal her man like that. … even if he was gay. Naruto groaned in agony.

“Why life?! Why you such a biiiitch?”
Sakura raised a brow but merely shrugged it off and continued.
“Yeah… so anyways, you gonna go to Sai’s party tonight?”
Naruto raised a brow at this.
“I thought you were grounded after throwing a hissy fit yesterday for not finding you’re “Beloved Sasuke-Kun”.”
“Ch,” Sakura waved him off dismissively. “As if THAT’S gonna stop me.” she then pulled out her compact mirror and put on her shinny cherry boom lip gloss before smacking her lips together then winking at him suggestively “You only live once!” then blew him a kiss as she walked away leaving nothing more than the echoing sounds of her clickety high heel shoes.


“…”

“You only live once huh?”

He snorted to himself.

“Why the fuck not?”

Then smiled as he pressed the friend acceptance button.

“YOLO.”

And walked out of the mall like a boss.
Correct me if I'm wrong 2 (NaruSasu bonus)
Originally I was just gonna post this since it was a tie for it being a SasuNaru or NaruSasu and call it good. But then more people commented and really wanted this series to be a SasuNaru. But I had already made this one. So I was all like, well what the hell I'm I gonna do? I don't wanna see this go all to waste. So I decided to make this a bonus chapter and promote the SasuNaru version I made later on as the actual chapter. So yeah sorry if you wanted NaruSasu but the people have spoken. But hey at least you get one chapter that NaruSasu. ^^;


SasuNaru version : yaoitotoro.deviantart.com/art/…
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He couldn’t take it anymore.
“That’s not a complete sentence.”
But he couldn’t stop.
“Wrong ‘there’.”
He just kept reading.
“It’s well not will.”
And reading.
“Do they even use a word check?”
And reading.
. . .
“Oh come on!” he slammed his hands on his desk “That’s not even the right word!”

Sasuke wanted to scream and pull his freakin hair out. Everything about this story was wrong. There were too many run-ons, misspelled words, god-awful grammar, and incorrect terminologies. It pissed him off to no end… yet he couldn’t stop reading the damn thing! How can something so unreadable be addictive to read?! He then ran his hand through his bangs pulling them back in annoyance. What made it worse was that he actually couldn’t wait for the next chapter to be posted online. He sighed.

“Sometimes I wonder if, deep down inside, I’m some kind of masochist.”
“Well, I certainly wouldn’t be surprised if you were.”
Sasuke twitched as he turned in his caster chair to face his brother who was currently leaning against the doorframe of his bedroom.
“Go away Itachi.”
“Well that’s just rude.”
Rude huh? Sasuke commented to himself as he leaned back in his chair with his arms crossed. Then why the hell you smiling?
“Whaddaya want?”
“I merely came in to check on you.” He then wiggled his eyebrows suggestively “With all that moaning coming out of your room I just HAD to see what was going on.”
“That was purely out of frustration.”
“Seeexual frustration?”
“… get out.”

Itachi laughed as he left Sasuke alone with his “frustrations”.  Sasuke turned back around to face his computer and shook his head slowly in disbelieve. Of all the people in the world why was he stuck with having someone like him as an older brother? Didn’t he have better things to do than to ruin his life?
“Oh and put on something decent. We’re going to the Haruno’s party tonight.”
He then banged his head on the keyboard.
Apparently not.

He got up and began rummaging through his closet for his black long sleeve silky button up shirt. That would be decent enough right? Pulling it out he put it on and examined himself in front of the mirror. It looked fantastic. … which is why it had to go. He may have needed to look nice, but not that nice. The last thing he needed was that damn Sakura drooling all over him. He managed to find a semi decent shirt and head down the stairs.

“Sasuke, what are you wearing?”
Sasuke mentally sighed as he continued walking down the stairs.
“Shirt and Jeans dad.”
“We’re going to a social gathering not a bowling alley.” He noted, as he looked at Sasuke’s dark blue short sleeve shirt with two thick black lines down the sides and faded fitting jeans. “Change into actual dress clothes.”
Sasuke bit his lip in frustration as he trudged himself back upstairs. Seriously? All this for one lousy party? Just whom were they trying to impress, the president of the United States? It wasn’t like he didn’t understand that he needed to look nice. But for the Haruno’s, really? What where they even celebrating?
“Why don’t you put on your black long sleeve button up?!”
His mother yelled up the stairs followed by Sasuke slamming the door. This was going to be a very long night.

The car ride was awkward. No one talked and they just sat there in silence. Sasuke frowned at this. Why where they even going? NO ONE was looking forward to it. It was like when his mother dragged them to Texas to visit their relatives on thanksgiving when she herself didn’t want to. Sasuke sighed as he stared out the window as the Haruno’s mansion came to view. Again, they got out in silence and they knocked on the door.

“Ah Mr and Mrs. Uchiah.” Mr. Haruno smiled as he did a semi bow as he let them in. “welcome.” They headed towards the living room where everyone was gathered and talking. God the room looked more like a ballroom than a living room. Just made you feel sorry for the butlers who had to organize this every two to four times a month. Not to mention how long it must take to clean these huge ass rooms. As their parents mingled with the crowed, Itachi and Sasuke stood against the wall drinking sparkling cider. It wasn't long before Itachi noticed something.

“Your boyfriends here.”
Sasuke groaned as he too noticed the other person glairing at him. No this guy was NOT his boyfriend. If anything he was far from it. This guy was obsessed with being better than him since they were of rival family’s.
“Jesus…” Sasuke complained as the boy started walking towards them “Here we go…”

“Ah Sasuke it’s SO good to see you.”
“Piss off Hyuuga.”
“Here to impress lady Haruno?” he then pinched Sasuke’s cheek and gave it a giggle. “Cause I must say you two make the CUTIEST couple.”
“Oh gag me a river.”
Sasuke snapped as he swatted his hand away from him.
“Speaking of gag, how are things with your family’s current investment with the ICPMA corporation?”
“Who knows?”
Sasuke commented before chugging down his drink. Quite frankly Sasuke never gave a shit about his family’s business. Why this guy did though was beyond him.
“Well we recently acquired a deal contract with the-“
“Nobody cares Neji.”
Neji twitched.
“Well you SHOULD care.” He then jabbed his finger harshly on Sasuke’s chest. “Because one day my family’s going to out source you and we’ll be the ones dominating this god forsaking place.” He then took a step back pulled out his collar to adjust his suit and smiled contently at the young Uchiah. “Do enjoy the rest of the party, after all, she did plain this just to see you.” And left. Sauske was fuming.

“God I wish this had alcohol.”
Itachi chuckled at Sasuke’s comment.
“Careful, mother might hear you.”
“Cause god forbid her baby boy should NEVER do that.” Sasuke rolled his eyes. “Itachi why do we even have to be here?”
“Truth be told I have no idea.”
“… If we headed towards the back-“
“They would know.”
Sasuke groaned. So much for escape.

“Sasuke-Kun~!”
And speaking of escape.
“If anyone asks-“
“You went to the restroom.”
Itachi smirked as he took the empty wine glass from Sasuke and watched him bolt. He may have been an ass at times but he would never leave his little brother hanging. He then calmly took a sip as the pink hair girl known as Sakura headed his way.

“Alright Itachi, where is he? And don’t say “the bathroom” because we both know that’s bullshit.”
Itachi raised a brow. So she did catch onto their little scheme, impressive. Now what was he going to say? Itachi decided to merely shrug and continue sipping. Wasn’t like he knew where he was anyways. She made a sound of frustration and marched off. Itachi chuckled. She wasn’t a bad person or anything like that, but he’d be damned if she ended up with his brother. I mean could you imagine little pink haired Uchiah’s? Itachi shivered before taking another sip. No, no you could not.

As Sakura continued her search Sasuke continued running away from her. He then looked at the back door only to find his father standing there. Sasuke clicked his teeth, man his family knew him well… he then went upstairs in hopes to lock himself in a room. As he reached the top of the stairs though he noticed the room right in front of him was open along with the huge windows whose breezes where so strong it blew random papers all over the place making a mess. Sasuke raised a brow at this and walked towards the window to close it-

“Wha-?! Hey! Don’t close that!” Confused Sasuke poked his head out and noticed someone was sitting on the roof. “I’m gonna need to go back in sooner or later!”
Sasuke chuckled as he too hopped onto the roof.
“You sure about that?”
The boy on the roof pondered.
“Well… at some point my folks ARE planning to leave…”
“Yeah, at SOME point.”
The boy beside him chuckled.
“So what are you here for?”
“To be a hospitable guest.”
“Ah yes because you come off as SUCH a gentleman.” He then snorted “Mr. Lock everyone out of the house.”
“Hey, I was doing you a favor.”
“Ah huh sure." The boy smiled as he side glanced towards Sasuke. "So who are you anyways?”
“Sasuke.” He then raised his hand to shake “Sasuke Uchiha.”
The boy gasped.

“Noooo, YOU’RE Sakura’s knight and shinning armor?” he then burst out laughing, “what kind of knight hides from his princess?”
“What princess?”
Now he was dying.
“Oh oh god, my insides…”
“Take it you don’t like her either?”
“Believe it or not I’m actually one of her friends.” He then whipped a tear out of his eye. “That’s how I know about you, she never shuts up about how perfect you are.”
Sasuke smirked.
“What do you think about me?”
“Hmmm-“ the boy turned to look up and down at him. “Well for starters… you’re a bit of an ass. You’re no prince charming and you’re far from perfect-“ Sasuke elbowed him and the boy began laughing again. “But you’re not bad either.” Sasuke smiled back at him.
“You’re not so bad yourself.”
“I know.”
He commented as he whisked his hair to the side causing Sasuke to roll his eyes.

Sasuke looked up at the full moon then leaned back resting his head on his arms.
“You know, I thought tonight was gonna suck. But I'm actually having a really good time right now.”
The other boy then mimicked Sasuke’s actions.
“Me too.”
They stayed like that for a while and stared at the stars. It was a gorgeous night and nether of them wanted to spoil it with words. If anything they just wanted this moment to last.
“I never did catch your name…”
“It’s Naruto.” The boy replied “Naruto Uzumaki.”
Correct me if I'm wrong 1
I changed the ending of the sample a bit to make it a party. Other than that what do you guys think of this being the first chapter? I wanted to try a different method of how Sasuke and Naruto meet. Usually it's cause they have the same class or just meet at school. This time I was going for a "I meet them during the summer" vibe. I don't know. Too much? Like I said I still don't really know where I'm going with this, so maybe I'll stick with this chapter one or re-write it to something else. Also I got a tie for wither this should be a SasuNaru or a NaruSasu.

Leave me comments!!


And have a wonderful super special awesome day. ... believe it XD

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  • Mood: Stuck
  • Listening to: the people all around me
  • Reading: the expressions on their faces
  • Watching: they're every move
  • Playing: the game of society
  • Eating: the words they say
  • Drinking: my life away
Nothing new is really going on, I just wanted to point out that I'm bored and busy all at the same time. I wanna write stuff but school's being such a bitch, yeah know? Granted my cousin got me addicted to this anime called Haikyu!! Right after getting me hooked into Free! (all in which are full of adorkable sports anime guys, which you should totally go see) and have been watching them whenever I have the spare time. But other than that busy. Seriously, I don't even remember the last time I wrote something.

Speaking of writing, I was trying out this new idea called Correct me if I'm Wrong and it did get some good comments. I may continue that if I get the time but... I'm already kinda bored with it. Lame right? I mean, I just started it and now I'm bored with it. I guess that's cause I'm having a hard time figuring out how to make it exciting later on. I don't want it to be JUST about Sasuke editing Naruto's writing after all. As fellow followers you should know I'm ALL about the drama. I was actually thinking about going back and trying that Get a Life Kai idea I had a few journals back.

Get a Life KaiHave any of you guys heard of Dragonball Z Kai and where like "what the fuck is Kai?" like I was? Well, from what I've interpreted it means renewed. I guess it's like starting over but using the same plot / concept? Who knows *shrugs shoulders*.
So what's this got to do with Get a Life? Well, after reviewing a few comments on the series (mainly fanfiction.net) a lot of people really wanted me to be more focused on the actual "gaming" aspect of the series and less on the drama (oh and my grammar, but that's not gonna get any better thanks to my learning disability and me not being able to hear / catch what most people perceive as wrong. As for spelling, if someone wants to edit my work awesome, or wise, GET OVER IT!!). Which is pretty fair considering that was kinda the point of the series. What ended up happening is that, well, I don't make outlines for my stories, so when I write it's just whatever comes to mind. So I guess what happened was that there came an opportunity to add some


Any thoughts?

(Also this is the part where I sound like a broken record and say "Hey guys, you got any idea's I should try out?" XD )

I would really like some comments.

And speaking of comments I'll still leave some for those who wanted me to read their stories and tell them what I thought of it or point out a few things like I did a few months ago

Supporting the fansOver the years people every now and then leave me comments about how they would like me to read their work and give them advise or ideas. Which I think is awesome because they asked ME. I love writing stories and I want to support others who do as well. Even more so because when I first started out the only one who would read my stuff was my cousin, which most of you know as my editor. I know that doesn't sound like much, but thanks to her fueling me with wild ideas and editing my work I was able to become the kick ass YaoiTotoro you come to know and love today. It took just one person. Yeah I got many fans now who totally help motivate me too (by the way, thanks guys ^^ ) but I wouldn't of even gotten fans if it weren't for her.
Which is why I am making this journal. We may not be cousin's but I can certainly be that person who motivates you and lend you a hand. If you guys ever want me to read any of your stuff comment here! I will read your work and give whatever advise I can. Grant


Also I was just randomly curious as to which story you guys liked more, Get a Life or the Nerds and Jocks are STILL in College. I kinda wanna know so I know which one I should be focused on more. 

Anyways, I guess that's it for now. I'll try to be better at keeping you guys updated and actually do some writing.

Again I would love comments and suggestions!! I'm bored and don't wanna do homework!!
Normally my cousin is my editor, but with school kicking both our asses she hasn't been able to help. However I got some good news. On fanfiction.net a user named pikachu2510 (same name as their DA account) offered to help out. So she'll be going over my work. Isn't that awesome?! I mean, I have a fan who WANTS to edit my work! For free!

God I love my fans, I don't know where I'd be in my writing without you guys. 

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