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The Nerd and the Jock pt 13 idea B

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The part that has [ ] inbetween is the same stuff I used in the intro in Idea A, so you can actually skip all this if you like. Just scroll down until you see the --- * Idea B * part.



[  While Naruto was in the shower, Sasuke started washing the sheets.
"See? I told you if we left them alone it would sort it self out."
Sasuke sighed as he started the washing machine.
"Nothing happened."
"Bull shit! Un!" Diedara pointed an acussing finger. "Something must of happened if your washing your sheets! That and even if it was a messy wet dream, how could he not notice it?!"
Sasuke blushed in embarrassment as he started remembering what had just happened a few moments ago.
"See? Your blushing! What happened? Un!"
"…nothing." He mumbled quietly and embarrassingly.
"Oh come on!! Pleeeeeeeeease?" Diedara whined as he rocked Sasuke back in forth.
"Does he need to?" Itachi smirked. "Just look at his pants."
Now Sasuke was just dead embarrassed. He was gonna change once he had gotten out of the shower and hoped no one would notice. But they did.
"Ooh! Sasuke had a wet dream about Naru-Chu! Un!"
"…Naru-Chu?"
"Admit it, it's a cute nickname! Un!"
Sasuke said nothing on the matter. "Just…just don't tell him about this, alright?"
"Hmph. Fine. Un."
"Ch, who needs to if he just see's it?"
Sasuke's face went scarlet red. If Naruto saw that he had cum himself he'd die from embarrassment!

Once the two of them had left Sasuke had thrown his dirty boxers and top into the load and grab a towel. Naruto should be done by now…right? Sasuke then headed towards the bathroom door and knocked.
"Naruto? Are you still in there? I need to take a shower."
Just then Naruto had opened the door. "Then come right in and take one!"
But Sasuke didn't move. Naruto wore nothing but a towel around his waist and his body was flushed from the heat and his body was covered in drupelets of water. And what made it worse was how incredibly sexy Naruto looked when his hair was wetten down.
"Sasuke? You okay?" Naruto then pulled his bang back and placed his forehead against Sasuke's. SO. CLOSE!! "You do feel…a little warm…" there lips were centimeters apart-!! And Sasuke fainted.
"Gah! You really do have a fever!! Sasuke!!"

---

Once Sasuke woke up he ended up making eye contact with a smirking Itachi.
"You fainted."
Sasuke blushed. Not his fault the dope was hot.
"Too bad you didn't fake it. Un. Then you would of noticed that he carried you all the way here...hot, wet, sweaty and completely shirtless."
Sasuke whined. "Shut- uuuup!"
The door knocked and Naruto came in.
"Is he alright?"
"Hm, yeah. He's just heat sensitive. The steam from your shower must have made him dizzy."
Sasuke sighed. He was glad Itachi was able to come up with a good lie.
"Oh…then it was my fault." He then gave Sasuke the saddest look. "I'm…I'm sorry."
"N-No no, it's alright." Sasuke said reassuringly. "I'm alright…though if you feel that badly about it, you could buy me a manga once we get to the bookstore."
Naruto blinked a couple times, then laughed.
"Same as always…"
Sasuke got up. "I still need a shower so…we'll head out once I'm done."
"Once your done with your shower? Not when you're dressed?" Naruto smirked "I didn't know you were a nudest."
Sasuke rolled his eye then bonked him on the head.
"Dope. You know what I mean."
Naruto laughed then walked out of the room. Sasuke sighed deeply.
"Yep, that is a sigh of love~"
Sasuke then groaned. He had forgotten they were still in his room.
"Well you two get out already?!"
The two of them laughed as they walked out of Sasuke's room. Once they were out of ear range, Sasuke got up and headed towards the shower.

---

"So here's the plan." Naruto began as the two of them began walking outside towards the bus. "We'll catch the 4 until we hit SandVil ST then walk about two blocks up a hill and then we'll be there."
Sasuke nodded along. At least Naruto knew where they were going, 'cause he sure as hell didn't. He never went that far into town into the Sand district. They stopped at the bus stop and waited for there bus. Sasuke was actually a bit excited. This…this was kinda like a date. But since they were dudes, they were just 'hanging out'.

"What else is there to do in the Sand district?" Sasuke asked. Naruto pondered a bit.
"Well…I know Gaara lives there…honestly I don't know. Everytime I'm there with him we tend to just go to the park." Naruto then pulled out his cell phone "I'm sure if I texted him he'd reply with a few places."
Sasuke then closed Naruto's cell, which in turn made Naruto look confusingly at Sasuke.
"I think…it be more exciting if we just explored the place. Yeah?"
Naruto smiled. "Yeah! That sounds like a great idea!"
Sasuke sighed in relief. He honestly didn't want to bump into either of their friends, both his and Naruto's. He just wanted it to be just the two of them. The bus showed up and they both hopped on.  ]

--- * Idea B *

The two of them sat next to each other on the bus. Sasuke was so excited! They were on a date! Well…'hanging out' but whatever, same thing really. It was just a manlier way of saying it.
"Wanna lesson?" Naruto asked as he held an ear bud near Sasuke. Curious Sasuke took it from him and placed it in his ear. He wondered what kind of music he lessoned to. Naruto pressed play and the music began to play.
"…what is this?"
"You never lesson to My Darkest Days? Man that sucks."
"My Darkest Days? I thought you were a Jock, not a goth."
"Oh? And just were you expecting? Justin Beber?"
Sasuke shivered, why? Why?
"Though…I did like that one song he did…Never say never?"
"You would wouldn't you?"
"…is that suppose to mean something?"
Sasuke snickered. He really was a dope.

They lessoned to some music and hopped off. They then started walking up the hill.
"Yeah know, this is actually one of my most favorite places."
"Really? A place that's surrounded by books is your favorite place to go? You don't even like going to the Library."
"Only 'cause people keep telling me to shush all the time!" Naruto pouted. "I can't help it when I read something funny…"
"So you actually read?"
"Ah hell no! Man-ga!" Naruto cheered. Sasuke rolled his eyes. Of course.
"Naruto, it's about time you read."
"Huh? Why?"
" 'Cause, you're a dope."

The two of them walked inside and Sasuke began listing a couple of random books as he pulled them off the shelf and gave a brief summary on each.
"And this one is called Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. It's about a detective who's trying to find out who this monstrous person in his village is. This is –"
Sasuke then stopped as he noticed Naruto was no longer paying any attention.
"Dope, I'm trying to find you a good book."
"Yeah but…I hate reading." Naruto then pulled a random book out and flipped through the pages. "There no pictures and full of words I don't even know. Hell I'm convinced there not even in a dictionary."
"Ever looked any of those 'words' up in a said dictionary?"
"Why? That would be work."
Sasuke sighed.
"Well, maybe because your reading really girly girl books that only girls would understand such as the one your holding in your hand."
Naruto then closed the book then looked at the cover.
"Girls actually read huge ass books this big about vampires? Dude, this book is bigger than my head from both width and length! Who the crap has time to actually read all this?"
'I do…' Sasuke thought to himself.
"Hey wait a second…wasn't Twilight made into a movie?"
"Yes, yes it was…you seen it?"
"Only the first one. Don't see what the big deal was though…it kinda sucked."
'the book was better' Sasuke wanted to say but didn't. He sure as hell didn't want him finding out that he actually read that said girly book.

"You mean to tell me you don't like ANY kind of books at all?"
"Nope! I don't even own any unless there ones I need for school."
Sasuke was dumbstrucked. Naruto didn't own one messily book that wasn't school related?!? He had a fucking Library full of books!! How could Naruto not have one!?!
"Well uh… is there ANY topic or genera that you think you MAY like?"
"Nope."
"Not even one that involved sports?"
"Why would I read about someone else who's playing sports? I'd rather just play them."
Sasuke sighed. This dope was so- oh what's the word? Stubborn? Unreasonable? No, not quite.  More like… a pain in the ass.

Naruto then pulled out another random book off the shelf.
"…This one looks better."
"How so?"
"Look how thin it is!"
Well that was one way to look at it…
"The outsiders huh? I read that one. It's about two rival gangs and how two of them kills a member of the other gang and have to hide from everyone."
Naruto blinked a couple times. "They fit all that in this tiny little book?"
"Yeah."
Naruto opened it and began reading the first page of the book. Well, Sasuke thought to himself, at least it's a start. He then too pulled out a book and began to read.
!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE READ AND REPLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is idea B. This one is more focused on the NaruSasu pairing than the other. I want an idea of what it is people like the most. More sub character action or just NaruSasu action (since this is after all a NaruSasu fan fiction). Please comment! Once I know which one people liked the most, then I'll be able to continue from there idea. In other words- YOUR COMMENTS ARE CRUCIAL!! No pressure. I just won't be able to continue without it. Think of it as "I actually care what my veiwers are thinking". Like a commercialist! XD

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RhiannaWillow's avatar
Idea A Gives you much more writing possibility's but your the author so its up to you in the end